Last edit for Tapestry. This is the version that has been officially entered into Tell Me A Lie.

Thanks muchly to =ladyofx and ~lilvani for the constructive critique. Nearly everything they suggested has been fixed, along with one or two other minor things on my part. Have a read, and tell me if it seems any better.



This is my entry for the Tell Me A Lie contest, and one I hope does well. It's not entirely complete yet, I still plan to do more work to up until the 30th, getting it tweaked just right, but it's a version that I don't sharing with dA.

Advice, opinions, and critique are appreciated, but because this is an entry for a contest, there are certain people that I think would be acting favoritely to give me critique. Specifically, anybody that's a judge for Tell Me A Lie I would appreciate NO critique from. Opinions are of course welcome, but anything beyond that, please refrain if you are a judge.

Otherwise, HAVE AT THEE!